Thursday, April 16, 2009

Huzzah!

I've finally coome up with a line for Thermal that I actually like.

Started with: "riding on the flames from our love burning" (cheesy)
Moved on to: "riding on a thermal built of yearning" (hard to grasp)
And now I've settled on: "With your help my love, I'm learning"

It finally seems to fit, and I'm so glad because that spot's been bugging me since I wrote the thing last...November?

So, yes.

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